How to create profitable B2B offers



March, 2010

Do you want to build profitable relationships with your prospects and customers?

Well, in B2B there’s only one place to start. That’s with your offer.

Make an offer your prospects simply cannot refuse - an offer that is so compelling they stop what they’re doing right now to make that call, click on your link, or fill out your response card.

But too often, you see emails, web pages and letters that slip up on the tiny details. And in direct response it’s the little steps that add up to the big conversions, and serious ROI.

Try these for starters:

Keep your offer simple

Stop your prospects in their tracks by making your offer easy to understand at a glance.  Think about when you look at an ad. You don’t hang about, do you? Well, when you make an offer, your prospects respond in 1-2 seconds flat!  Delay is your number one enemy.

Avoid offering your prospects too much choice. If you’ve got an industry report, a white paper and a case study to offer, think about packaging them together as an Information Kit. As well as sounding more enticing, tests prove that if you offer three things separately, response goes down. 

Try to make everything easy on the eye. And I don’t mean neat and tidy. That’s a proven response killer too. But make your title, benefits and graphics nice and clear, and use bright colours that work. Why are all the “Download Here” buttons red, orange or blue? Because they work!

Give your offer credibility

Not long ago, a software client told me over the phone that he didn’t want any “Ra Ra” copy on his website. “I’m not selling chocolate bars here,” he said.

Well, quite right, I thought. You can say it about all B2B copywriting .Vague claims of superiority simply don’t wash with a business audience.

That’s why relevant information offers work so well in B2B. They add real value to a business user’s daily life. They can relate to your prospect’s daily work problems, help them do their jobs better, and sit on their desktops as checklists they can refer back to.

This is also why it’s always worth including testimonials in your offer promotions. They create a halo effect around your offer because they come from respected third parties and satisfied customers.  Think of testimonials as guarantees, doubly important on the page, where there’s no face to face selling going on.

Engage your prospect with plenty of detail

Give your prospects a reason to believe in your offer. In your promotion, don’t be afraid to supply all the key details of your webinar speakers, or white paper content. Fill it with all the benefits they will get for responding to your offer.

Above all, keep on selling right to the end. After all the hard work selling your offer the last thing you want is for your prospects to bail out of your response card or landing page. They could get a phone call, an incoming email, or they could simply get cold feet. Don’t let them off the hook. Remind them of the key benefits of your offer.

Finally, always remind prospects they have nothing to lose by responding to your offer. Make it easy to respond. Remove all obstacles. This is why we supply business reply envelopes and make simple requests for basic data only on a landing page.

Need help with structuring and developing your next offers? Fire an email to simon.rudge2@virgin.net or give me a call on 020 8943 2472 during office hours. I’ll be delighted to help.



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